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09. I admire you

Zarian was heading towards his office, lost in routine thoughts, when his phone buzzed.

He picked it up and switched to speaker mode โ€” it was his PA, reminding him about an important deal. The call ended with a formal โ€œThank you, Mr. Malik.โ€

But that name "Mr. Malik" pulled him into a memory he was desperately trying to forget. Ayeda.

Her voice, her presence, her stubborn gratitudeโ€ฆ everything came rushing back for a second.

Before he could fall too deep into thought, a knock tapped gently on his car window.

A little boy stood there, his arms full of roses, hope gleaming in his eyes.

Zarian rolled the window down with a soft smile. โ€œBhaiya, le lo na,โ€ the boy said eagerly.
(Bhaiya, please take it)

โ€œKya karunga mai lekar?โ€ Zarian asked lightly, amused.
(What will I do with it?)

The boy grinned innocently. โ€œApni biwi ya girlfriend ko dedenaโ€ฆ jisse mohabbat ho. Khush ho jaayegi.โ€
(Give it to your wife or girlfriendโ€ฆ the one you love. Sheโ€™ll be happy.)

That word "mohabbat" echoed again. And this time, it stung a little.

Shaking his head with a faint sigh, Zarian said, โ€œThik hai, dedo.โ€

He took all the roses, thinking he'd give them to his mother and Maliha later.

The signal turned green. The boy flashed a toothy grin and began to run across the road. But in the blink of an eye, a speeding car came out of nowhere.

Zarianโ€™s heart stopped.

The child was flung into the air and landed brutally on the road, just feet from Zarianโ€™s car.

Zarian jumped out instantly. But as soon as he reached the boy, his legs froze.

Blood was flowing from the childโ€™s head, his half-open eyes flickering in pain. The notes he was holding were now soaked in crimson.

Zarianโ€™s breath caught but only for a second.

He rushed forward, gathered the boy carefully in his arms, and placed him in the passenger seat. He fastened the seatbelt, hand shaking slightly, then called his PA in urgency.

โ€œI want a neurosurgeon ready in ten minutes. Tell the hospital to prep the OT now.โ€

Exactly ten minutes later, Zarianโ€™s car halted in front of the hospital.

Without waiting for help, he picked up the unconscious child again and ran inside.

The hospital staff, already informed, had everything ready.

Zarian gently laid the child on the stretcher. Nurses moved swiftly. The boy was taken into surgery.

Zarian stepped back, hands stained with blood and worry in his eyes.

He paid the full amount at the counter and signed every required document without hesitation.

Zarian sat silently on the cold metal chair outside the operation theatre, his eyes fixed on his hands โ€” stained with dried blood. His fingers, usually steady and firm, now trembled faintly.

He pulled out his phone and called his PA.

โ€œCancel everything today,โ€ he said in a low, steady voice, and hung up.

His face was calm โ€” eerily calm โ€” but inside, his mind was spiraling. The image of the boy lying on the road replayed again and again. His small body. His hopeful eyes, the bright smile he'd flashed while selling those rosesโ€ฆ and then, just seconds later โ€” blood, silence, stillness.

Nurses rushed in and out of the corridor, now on high alert. After all, the child wasnโ€™t just a case anymore โ€” he was Zarian Malikโ€™s responsibility now.

Two hours passed.

The light above the OT finally turned off, and a doctor stepped out. Zarian rose to his feetย  not with panic, not with desperationย  but with a quiet hope that hadn't left his heart.

โ€œHeโ€™s out of danger,โ€ the doctor informed, pulling off his mask. โ€œHeโ€™ll regain consciousness in about 24 hours.โ€

Zarian closed his eyes for a second, exhaling deeply. Finally...

โ€œYou saved his life, Mr. Malik. If you hadnโ€™t brought him on timeโ€ฆโ€
Saying this doctor walked away.

โ€œAlhamdulillah... Allah apka lakh lakh shukr,โ€ Zarian whispered, his eyes still closed.

Around him, quiet murmurs floated through the hallway.

โ€œZarian Malik saved that child.โ€
โ€œHe stayed here for hours.โ€
โ€œHe paid for everythingโ€ฆโ€

Standing a few feet away, a girl in a white coat was silently listening โ€” her heart unusually still.

A soft smile found her lips before she even realised it.

It was Ayeda.

Her internship had just begun at this hospital, and fate, as if playing its own games, had brought her here today. She hadnโ€™t planned to stop. She hadnโ€™t even expected to see him. But something about his stillnessโ€ฆ about the way the chaos around him didn't touch the storm in his eyesโ€ฆ made her pause.

Without thinking, her steps moved forward โ€” slow, hesitant โ€” as if her heart was walking ahead of her.

Zarian felt it.

That pull.

The kind that doesnโ€™t come from footsteps or shadows but from a presence that your soul recognises long before your eyes do. He turned slowly.

Hazel eyes.

The same ones he had fought to forget buried under logic, distance, and discipline.

But todayโ€ฆ they were smiling at him.

Not with pity.

Not with awkward formality.

But with something genuine.

Something warm.

Something that melted into him before he could build another wall.

Ayeda stopped a little away from him.

She looked around for a second โ€” memories of whispered accusations and weightless rumours still echoed in her earsย  but today, she decided not to let fear win.

She looked at him with quiet honesty in her eyes, and in a voice barely above a whisper, she said:

โ€œI really admire you... I hope I become as good a human being as you someday, Mr. Malik.โ€

And just like thatโ€ฆ she walked away.

No dramatics.

No expectations.

Just truth โ€” simple, brave, and unadorned.

Zarian didnโ€™t stop her.

He didnโ€™t say a word.

But his world did.

The weight on his chest, the ache he had long silenced, all paused.

In the middle of bloodstains and guiltโ€ฆ in the middle of pain he wasnโ€™t allowed to feelโ€ฆ her presence had brought something rare.

Peace.

Like someone had put his heartbeat back in place โ€” just by showing up.

A soft, rare smile curved on his lips.

He looked down at his hands โ€” still stained with dried blood โ€” then at the hallway where she had vanished like a calm breeze after a storm.

And as if whispering a truth he could no longer fight, he exhaled โ€” not like a man defeated, but like a man who had finally surrendered:

โ€œAb aap sirf meri pasand nahiโ€ฆ
mohabbat ban chuki hain, Miss Khan.โ€


Khan mansion
Ayeda was sitting in the hall, surrounded by her family โ€” laughter, music, chatter echoing from every corner. The entire house buzzed with excitement, preparations in full swing.

After all, it was a wedding they'd dreamed of for years โ€” her wedding.

Dates were fixed. Functions decided. Jewellery boxes opened. The sparkle of gold and the weight of tradition danced all around her. Her mother, Aliya, was lovingly making her try necklace after necklace, smiling with teary eyes โ€” a motherโ€™s joy and ache blending into one.

But Ayeda... she felt like her breaths were getting smaller.

The room, though full of love, was closing in.

She gently excused herself, rose from the sofa, and made her way to the terrace โ€” her silent escape from everything that suddenly felt too loud.

The breeze hit her face like a quiet comfort.

Standing under the open sky, she closed her eyes for a long moment, letting the wind kiss her skin, letting the noise fall away. And then, with a breath that felt heavier than it shouldโ€™ve been, she whispered the name she shouldnโ€™t:

"Mr. Malik..."

A small, bittersweet smile touched her lips.

She looked up at the stars โ€” calm, distant, constant โ€” and said softly, almost like a silent prayer,

โ€œHe truly is a good man, Allahโ€ฆโ€

A soft silence followed. Her smile, once present, slowly faded as a quiet thought crept in,

โ€œPar aksar jo log sab ke baare mein sochte hainโ€ฆ unhein samajhne wala koi nahi hota.โ€

Her eyes remained fixed on the sky, shimmering with prayers unsaid.

And then, softlyย  with all the sincerity of a heart that felt too much, she whispered:

โ€œPleaseโ€ฆ take care of him.

Send someone into his life

someone who understands his silenceโ€ฆ and heals what he never speaks of.โ€

And with that, she stood there in silence not as a bride-to-be, not as a girl burdened with decisions
but as a heart, quietly hoping the best for the one she could never claim.

She prayed for someone to care for him...

Unaware that the one she was praying for โ€” was him,
and the one he was praying for โ€” was her.


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